Should make more chapters?? How Good was it?? (Multiple choices)

Hello! Alpha here with a new fanfiction of my favorite ship GLORYBRINGER!

Its about them as human kids in Junior High age but Glory and Deathy are the same age about. He's only one year older and same classes for the most part. There will be some others. I'm a SunnyFlight shipper and a Moonbli shipper.

 

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Deathbringer was walking to the school bus stop as he always does to get to school. Her turned the corner and ran into a smaller girl with light blue hair with red tips in her hair. She dropped her bag and some of her things fell out of it. She immediately started picking it up. She had startling green eyes.  

Woah, 

"Here, let me help you," He said kneeling down and helping her clean up.

 

"Oh, you run into me and now you're helping me? That's an old trick," She said sarcasticcally. 

 

Startled slightly by her sarcasm, she didn't look like one for sarcasm, he looked at her. She looked up at him. He saw her green eyes were filled with tears. 

 

"Are you okay?" He asked.

 

She looked down and wiped her eyes. "Yeah, never better." She replied half-heartedly, "I don't really talk about my life with people, especially ones that run into me more or less deliberately."

 

"It was by accident. And maybe you should talk to people?" Whoa what happened to my sarcasim?

 

"Yeah sure I get right on that," She said sarcastically.

 

"Seriously, though."

 

"I suppose I should say thanks for helping me, even if it was your fault," she snorted and got up, with all her things back in the bag. 

 

"No problem." He said as his friend, Jambu, came running up. 

 

"Hey!" Jambu bounced on his feet.

 

"Hey."

 

"Anything new?" 

 

"Not much," Deathbringer replied, but his eyes were on the girl staring at her feet and sitting on the curve.

 

After a few moments more people were at the bus stop. He knew a few; Sunny, StarFlight, Tsunami, Riptide, Fatespeaker, Clay, Peril, Turtle, Kinkajou, 

FeirceTeeth, StrongWings.

 

That didn't make them all his friends.

 

FeirceTeeth sneered at him as she walked past. He spat back. 

 

Not that he cared what she thought. DeathBringer was pretty popular, not stuck up though. Just has a lot of friends.

 

The bus pulled up and they all hopped in, he made sure to sit by Jambu. Jambu waved and called someone over. DeathBringer peered to see who. He lifted an eyebrow at Jambu when he saw who. Seeing this, Jambu told him she was his sister and he and his grandmother only recently found out. She was in the orphanage for most of her life before they knew. DeathBringer would have asked her name, but didn't want to seen desperate. Jambu had a way of leaving out important details sometimes.

 

The girl from earlier sat next to him, she glared at Jambu. 

 

"So he's your brother?" He asked lifting and eyebrow.

 

"I guess," She said.

 

"She finds it hard to beleive. Why do you think that is?" Jambu asked.

 

He snorted.

 

"We're nothing alike."

 

After a few moments the bus came to a hault. 

 

DeathBringer and Jambu walked to there first class. 

 

Everyone had a partner every class to sit with, most managed to sit with who they wanted. Not DeathBringer and Jambu.

 

Sunny and StarFlight.

 

Quibli and MoonWatcher.

 

Tsunami and Riptide.

 

Clay and Peril.

 

Turtle and Kinkajou.

 

FeirceTeeith and StrongWings.

 

Jambu got stuck with FateSpeaker. 

 

DeathBringer was alone.

 

There were plenty of others in their class, but it'd be a waste to name them all.

 

The teacher was Mrs. Blister in Algebra Math. Mrs. Nightmare.

 

The door opened and the Vice Princinbal stepped in, Mr. MorrowSeerer, also Blister's husband, he whispered to her and they walked outside. A few moments passed and

Mrs. Blister had a smaller girl by the arm. 

 

DeathBringer startled as he saw the girl from earlier rouchly grasped in the mean teachers hand. She wasn't as small as Sunny, but she didn't look like she was made to be handled like Blister does. Blister seemed to dislike her  more than other students too.

 

"We have a new student," Mrs. Blister said in her edgy voice, "her name is Glory."

 

Glory. Nice name.

 

Blister shoved Glory forwards. she pointed to the only empty spot, with DeathBringer. Glory's face was impassive as she sat by him.

 

"Hey, nice to see you again," He said as Blister when on to her lesson.

 

"Great. At least you're not my idiotic brother," She whispered. 

 

"Hes not that bad," He said. 

 

"Try living with him,"

 

"Haha," 

 

He noticed even while they talked she was listening to Mrs. Blister.

 

"Good attention span, then?" He asked, his dark blue eyes watching her petite frame.

 

She finally looked up at him, "I guess,"

 

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Should I continue?

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I am an Equalist, 

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Call me Doberman or Dober, (Dober is usually used by friends) 

 

Are you planning on making more at some point? Because I would be interested in reading more! :)

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  LGBTQ+

 

#Blizzbite

#Trindigo!

#Winterwatcher

 

See the line where the sky meets the sea, it calls me

 

#RememberTheLost-they're not forgotten

 

Be yourself there's no one better

 

#AcceptEveryone

 

We're Better Together!

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LONG LIVE ANARCHY, DESTROY YOUR LOCAL GOVERNMENT, AND BE CAREFUL: SERPENTINE IS 100% SALT

 

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I'm impressed. But how come I can never write this stuff. Like I'm working on this song doc thing in human au but it's so hard so good job

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-Gamer

-Tired always

-Roleplayer

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"Im Salty, tired, and will break into song at any moment" - me

 

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You all have made my day. Thank you all.  And I am planning to make more.

 

@Fira

 

Keep trying! Its always hard! But if you stick to it, you'll do great. And the more you practice the better you get! If its on here, when you finish send me the link and I'll probably read it and give you my honest opinion and some advice if you like.

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Call me Doberman or Dober, (Dober is usually used by friends) 

 

Chapter 2 Lunch


 

Sorry I know its short, next chapter  will be longer I promise

 

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Glory was sitting alone at lunch, not that she hated being alone. Her tray had many fruits and some chicken on a bone. But she couldn't eat because it was hard being new, or be in a family that didn't know you even existed while knowing your parents don't want you. To have to spend so long in a horrible place with people that hate you, that nightmare orphanage that treated her horrible.

 

Then the same boy from earlier approached her. He sat near her setting his tray on the table.  

 

"Help yourself," she mumbled.

 

"Hey, I thought we were friends?" He said sarcastically.

 

"Running into eachother is not friends,"

 

"You're just grumpy. I forgot to tell you my name," He said.

 

"Good for you,"

 

"My names DeathBringer," He said, "Glory."

 

She tried not to blush for some reason. 

 

"Not hungry?" 

 

"I guess," She said and took a spoonful of fruit.

 

He just sat watching her as he ate. 

 

"You don't have anything better to do? Anyone better to hang out with?" She asked.

 

"Rather sit here. I have fine company here," He replied. 

 

Her eyes widened in surprise. She looked at him in surprise. His eyes met hers. No, he's lieing no one means that. I'm not good company. I'm fine being alone. She felt her eyes water as she scolded herself for being stupid for believing  someone would ever mean that for a moment. His eyes softened as he noticed her tears and she looked away at her tray. 

 

"Sure," She said sarcastically unable to hide her sadness.  

 

"Maybe sometimes you need to believe people," He said.  

 

She tried. It only ends in heart break.

 

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Queen of Books, Sarcasm, and fandoms

an ace bi-lot

 

I is the Forum Fangirl! 

 

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Chapter 3 Movies

 

You asked for it! More Junior High WoF by Alpha!! Next chapter will be longer but I have to go somewere.

You all have inspired me with your kind words and encouragement so thanks to you all! (Sorry if some of the text messages are weird)

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They had talked at lunch after awhile of him trying to get her to talk to him.  She was stubborn, thats for sure. He learned she has a pet, not that she would tell him what kind.

But before the bell rang she offered him a reluctant smile. Score 1 for me. He thought. No one deserves to be depressed like that, he'll find a way to make her smile. One way or another. 

 

Finally, after more classes, the bell rang to announce school over for the day. 

By the time he was home, a message popped up on his phone. He heard Kitchen Sink by Twenty One Pilots playing on his phone to say a message from Jambu. He looked at his phone. 

 

   ____________________________________________________

  / hey Dude! Want to come hang out with me & G at the/    /  movies have three tickets if ya wanna go'        /  

/___________________________________________________/

  ________________________________________

 /sure dude! I'll meet you at your house? /

/________________________________________/

   ________

 / ya      / 

/_________/

  _______________

 /see u in a min /

/_______________/  

 

He set his back pack down by the door and put his phone in his pocket of his jeans. He opened the door and got on his bike rode  around a block  and not far from his house was Jambu and Glory's house. He knocked on the door with the back of his knuckle. The door swung open and Glory stood there wearing a blue hoodie and jean shorts. Her bangs were over her left eye and she wore red with yellow stripes sneakers.  

 

"I'm starting to think your stalking me," She said as he walked in.  

 

"No, just keep walking into eachother," He replied.  

 

"Literally or metaphorically?" She lifted a eye brow.

 

"Good one. Both," He grinned.  

 

"Ready?" Jambu asked as he stepped out of the hallway putting a hat over his bright pink hair. 

 

Glory shrugged and DeathBringer nodded.  The trio got on bikes and rode to the movies. They were watching Zootopia

 

After the movies Jambu asked if DeathBringer wanted to sleepover since it was Friday.  

 

"Sure," He said.

 

 

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Maybe Icicle, Sora, Winter, and Vermillion should be brought in? Their some of my favorite side characters (besides Winter, who is main)

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I am Terracotta the MudWing.

Call me Terra. I love UNDERTALE!

Readyfight The NightWing

Crisp The Fire Born SkyWIng

Frozenstream The IceWing

Shift The RainWing

Dolphin The SeaWing

Sure I'll try to fit in all the characters I can, but be patient it might take a few chapters, I've been in a hurry cas we've been trying to get a cat for me at my Grandmas house and they randomly call to pick me up. ;D

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Can you include one of my dragon OC's ?

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Alpha can you please meet me at my fourm, CALLING DRAGONQUEEN155 AKA ALPHA please?

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Sure @Reading Give me the describtion

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So, I am not sure if I should keep Morrowseerer as her father?

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I finished the first chapter of Moonbli!

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can you add my oc his name is Plasma he is a rainwing nightwing hybrid and he has godly powers but he keeps it a secret

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Vegan

Clemence (Red sash)

Easily Ignored

Oh so you think I'm cute when I'm angry. Well, get ready because I'm about to be GORGEOUS

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it was quite a read and it inspired me to do one myself except it would be highschool

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A DIAMOND THAT REFUSES TO CRUMBLE

A guardian angel 

Wings of faith

I will believe in god till my end

My true name is...

DIAMONDWINGS