How good is this RP?

Hi! This is my first RP that I've made, so please tell me how it is by voting. Here's the clan's backstory.

 

So the leader Nightstar was once in the SkyClan. She was a warrior. Then she got accused of something she didn't do, so she ran off and became a loner. She missed the clan lifestyle, so she decided to make her own clan. So for moons she's been collecting loners to join the clan. The clan's name is NightClan. Now it is a true clan.

 

Form

 

Name: 

Age: 

Gender:

Rank: 

Appearance: 

Personality:

Skills:

Other:

Backstory:

 

Rules

 

1. Normal RP rules.

2.You can't have more than one cat, unless if your cat dies. Then you have to fill out the form again with a different cat and have it be approved by me.

3. You can't kill somebody else's cat without permission.

4. Check to see if somebody else already has the position you want. If somebody already has it, then you can request another place with the same cat.

5. You must fill out all of the fields of the form, or your cat will not be accepted. If you don't know about it yet, you can write 'tba' o.r you can write 'unknown'.

6. Make the age realistic.

7. The cat must have flaws.

8. NO SPOILERS! I just stated the seiries!

9. In 'Backstory' you must have how the cat got there.

10. You may save spots, but it expires after a week.

11. In 'Other' you have to write nIGHTcLAN with the same capitalization in your POV color.

12. You don't have to do POV, but it would be preffered.

 

My Form

 

Name: Nightstar

Age: 22 moons

Rank: Leader

Appearance: Black cat, with silver eyes, some scars here and there

Personality: Fair, tactful, shy, & more tba.

Their Apprentance/Mentor: tba

Skills: tba

Mate/Crush: tba

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: Her backstory is the clan's backstory.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Save med cat

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

ATbAsH

on hiatus//dead inside

bnha trash

Saved!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Attention!

@Peacock! Your save expires tomorrow!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

@Peacock- Your save has expired.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

I had accidentally pressed send so the first form that posts wont be finished

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

Name: Foxtail

Age:   moons

Gender: Female

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance: She is fairly small for her age. She has red-ish orange fur with white paws, underbelly, and tip of the tail. Her tail is very fluffy (like a fox tail). Foxtail's eyes are a piercing, electric blue color. 

Personality: 

Skills: She is very fast and is able to jump higher and farther than most other

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: Foxtail was abandoned shortly after she fell ill one day as a kit and she was taken in by a rogue. 

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

Name: Featherbreeze

Age: 20 moons

Gender:female

Rank: warrior

Appearance: light yellow with some orange spots and a white underbelly

Personality:dumb and wise. Often sarcastic and once you get to know her, kind and loving.  Would fight for her new clan to the end. Often angers easily

Skills: stealth, so she would make a good hunter. 

Other:nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: was once a rouge.  She had lost her fmily at an early age. She had a tough life, she was beginning to starve to death when she heard about clan. immediately loved the idea and enter to join.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

              ʀʊռɛ

          She Her Timelord

➻ Triplet with Time and Tiger

➻ Definitely not Swampy

➻ Creator of CC

 

Technically, good times don't ever end. We'll always remember them.

 

242 Pages of Posts

6877+ Stars 

Name: Foxtail

Age: 15 moons

Gender: Female

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance: She is fairly small for her age. She has red-ish orange fur with white paws, underbelly, and tip of the tail. Her tail is very fluffy (like a fox tail). Foxtail's eyes are a piercing, electric blue color. 

Personality: She is very shy, doesn't talk barely at all, gets scared easily, and akes a while for her to trust other cats because she thinkst they might hurt her

Skills: She is very fast and is able to jump higher and farther than most other cats

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: Foxtail was abandoned shortly after she fell ill one day as a kit and she was taken in by a rogue. The rogue was killed a few moons later so she was left to fend for herself. Foxtail heard about the clan that Nightstar was making and decided to join.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

@Breaker- Maybe Foxtail should be Foxpaw? Then when she becomes a she can be Foxtail? You don't have to if you want to, I just want to keep it realistic.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

This is just so that I can read it.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Luna Alpha

she/her 12 years old

American

Proud christian

Huffulpyff

Rainwing

Riverclan

 

"People are neither noble nor wicked, they are like chef salads" the hook-handed man

 

Stormheart's love a warriors story. 350324

The free ones a pantala RP. 350603

@Breaker- Also, Foxtail/Foxpaw is too old to be an apprentice. Maybe she can be 10 moons old? That way she can be a warrior earlier? It will only take about 2 or 3 moons. Otherwise, accepted.

@swampcloud51- Accepted.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

@Lana Yeah. I can change her name to Foxpaw and I'll make her 8 moons old instead

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

@Breaker- Thanks!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

@swampcloud51- Would you like to mentor Foxpaw?

@Breaker- Would you be good if Featherbreeze Foxpaw's mentor?

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Okay, I'm changing the rules. You can have a maximum of 4 cats. That way if you have a litter of 3 you can also PoV their mom. Also, on the backstory I wrote SkyClan. Ignore that. I meant to write WindClan.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

bookmark

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Sunshine

Or Sakari

 

You're my constant in every moment

Constant

You've never failed me

All my life

You have never left my side

You are my constant

 

#SaveTheSouthernResidents

 

 

#StandWithSeaWorld

 

It never hurts to keep looking fosunshine.-Eeyore

I'd love to be Foxpaw's mentor

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

              ʀʊռɛ

          She Her Timelord

➻ Triplet with Time and Tiger

➻ Definitely not Swampy

➻ Creator of CC

 

Technically, good times don't ever end. We'll always remember them.

 

242 Pages of Posts

6877+ Stars 

Also we should add Crush/Mate to the form. If you're a queen you can add your kits in other.

POKE

C'mon! Make more cats!

P.S. I'm sorry it's so big, I want people to read it.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

coloredname: BlackTail

 

age: 20 moons

 

Gender: male

  

Rank: Warrior Cat in Nightclan

 

Appearance: black cat with a red bleeding scare across his eye. One of his eye surgery are dark green and the other eye Is brown. Claws are big and sharp.

 

Personality: mostly nice to some cats, stubborn, thinks he is the best warrior ever, very strong.

 

Mentor: tba

 

mate/crush: Dark Dusk

 

Other: nIGHTcLAN

 

backstory: BlackTail was banned from his clan, thunder clan for trying to kill the leader. Night star let him in her clan to live there. He met lots of Friends and enemy's there. He was banned from his old clan when he was 10 Moons.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

My name is scorpion the sandwing

 

I AM NOT A SCORPION FOR THE RECTORD!

 

Alot of people think im a scorpion...

 

Anyway, enjoy my forums

 

 

 

 

       

 

       

 

 

 

 

@Lana Of course I'd be fine with Featherbreeze as Foxpaw's mentor

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

@Scorpion- It's not realistic that Nightstar would let him in after Blacktail tried to kill his last leader. Maybe he was accused of it instead? Also, warriors don't have mentors. They are mentors. Warriors have apprentices. What is the PoV color? If you want it to be black you have to type everything else in a different color. Otherwise, accepted.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Save deputy please!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

•°Sapph°•

 

[She/her] [Bi] [Hufflepuff] [RiverClan]

 

Queen of Question Marks??

 

I'm back and gayer than ever

 

hey you ilysm you deserve an ice cream

Name: Owlgaze

Age: 17 moons

Gender: Female

Rank: Deputy

Appearance: creamy-white and light brown-dappled she cat with long legs, tall ears, a long fluffy tail, and light greenish-amber eyes. 

Personality: quiet, calm, mature, clever, puts other cats before herself (which can make her vulnerable in battle)

Skills: great at organizing patrols to the best of their abilities, is not very strong but make up for it with her intelligence. 

Other: nIGHTcLAN (its a light brown color, i cant tell if its working on my phone)

Backstory: grew up on her own in a twoleg barn, where she learned to avoid horses and twolegs while catching enough prey for herself. She joined NightClan when she was hardly the age of a new warrior and learned clan ways quickly, although with some trouble at the beginning.

Crush: TBA

 

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

•°Sapph°•

 

[She/her] [Bi] [Hufflepuff] [RiverClan]

 

Queen of Question Marks??

 

I'm back and gayer than ever

 

hey you ilysm you deserve an ice cream

The reason I added loners is so that we can recruit some cats.

 

Clan chart update:

 

Leader: Nightstar- A back she-cat with silver eyes, some scars here and there. (Lana)

Deputy: Open

Medicine Cat: Open

Medicine Cat Apprentice: Open

Warriors:

Featherbreeze- A light yellow she-cat with some orange spots and a white underbelly. [Apprentice: Foxpaw] (swampcloud51)

Blacktail- A black he-cat with a red bleeding scar across his eye. One of his eyes is dark green, while the other is brown. His claws are big and sharp. (Scorpion)

[Need 6 more to start]

Apprentices:

Foxpaw- A reddish-orange she-cat with white paws, a white underbelly, and a white tip of her tail. She is fairly small for her age. Her tail is very fluffy (like a fox tail). Foxtail's eyes are a piercing, electric blue color.

[Need 3 more to start]

Queens:

[Need 2 to start]

Kits:

[Need 2 litters of 2 to start]

Elders:

[Need 1 to start]

Loners:

[Need 3 to start] 

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

@Sapph- Accepted!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Oops. Got to fix the Deputy slot.

 

Deputy: creamy-white and light brown-dappled she cat with long legs, tall ears, a long fluffy tail, and light greenish-amber eyes.(Sapph)

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Save Medicine cat.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

\\Snowfall//               

She/Her

Discipline is everything. If you don't have it. . . 

"Kindness is like snow. It beautifies everything it covers."- Kahil Gibran

#FFT

Hello again

Forum Family: Zodiac 

 

 

 

 

Save one queen with two kits and a warrior

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

          ~Crystul~

 

 He left the other 99 to look for YOU

 

 Mirror, Tell me something...

 

          #Prolife

          #Canada

          #Homeschool

          #RCatholic

         

 I may suddenly leave for a long time...

                   

Save a warrior

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

~Breaker~ 

 

"Don't let anyone rob you of your imagination, your creativity, or your curiosity. It's your place in the world; your life. Go on and do all you can with it, and make it the life you want to live." 

- Mae Carol Jemison

save med cat apprentice

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Sunshine

Or Sakari

 

You're my constant in every moment

Constant

You've never failed me

All my life

You have never left my side

You are my constant

 

#SaveTheSouthernResidents

 

 

#StandWithSeaWorld

 

It never hurts to keep looking fosunshine.-Eeyore

Name: Sunnypaw (heart)

Age: 9 moons

Gender: F

Rank:  med cat apprentice

Appearance: Golden fur, blue eyes, white tail tip and paws

Personality: A little shy, kind, clever, thoughtful, creative

Skills: Good memory, keen eyesight, knows how to make others feel good physically and emotionally

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: She was still a kit when her mother, Lightshine, joined the clan.

 

Name: Lightshine

Age: 28

Gender: f

Rank: warrior

Appearance: golden with white splotches and blue eyes

Personality: Cautious, caring, clever, outgoing

Skills: She's a good hunter and an even better warrior

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: Lightshine was a ThunderClan cat, but her mate was a WindClan cat. She gave birth to two kits, one of them being Sunnypaw, but they kicked her out of ThunderClan for breaking the warrior code. She went to WindClan, but her mate had died fighting off a fox earlier that day. Lightshine left the clans, eventually finding Nightstar and joining her. Sadly, her younger kit, Leopardkit, died before they found Nightstar.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Sunshine

Or Sakari

 

You're my constant in every moment

Constant

You've never failed me

All my life

You have never left my side

You are my constant

 

#SaveTheSouthernResidents

 

 

#StandWithSeaWorld

 

It never hurts to keep looking fosunshine.-Eeyore

Name: Shimmercloud

Age: 36 moons

Gender: female

Rank: medicine cat

Appearance: light silver pelt with sky-blue eyes, white tabby stripes

Personality: not very gentle or patient, but is very smart and loyal (almost all my cats are loyal). Short-tempered but wise (kind of like Jayfeather)

Skills: sharp eyes to spot herbs and signs, and a good memory. Can notice immediately if you are lying or not

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: originally WindClan's medicine cat. StarClan sent a sign for her to help Nightstar, so she went after her, and became NightClan's medicine cat instead. 

 

Hollyfall

Age: 36 moons

Gender: female

Rank: warrior

Appearance: sleek, black she-cat with blue eyes

Personality: ambitious but loyal, clever and sharp-tongued. Not the kindest and most trustworthy cat you have ever met, but is a good Clanmate (when I say good, I mean she won't betray you. But she will snap at you if you bother her)

Skills: lithe and swift (she was from WindClan, after all), so she can fight and hunt easily.

Other: nIGHTcLAN

Backstory: she was littermates with Shimmercloud and went with her to join NightClan. She didn't understand why Shimmercloud wanted to leave, but she went with her anyways.

 

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

\\Snowfall//               

She/Her

Discipline is everything. If you don't have it. . . 

"Kindness is like snow. It beautifies everything it covers."- Kahil Gibran

#FFT

Hello again

Forum Family: Zodiac 

 

 

 

 

@Crystsal- Saved!

@Breaker- Saved!

@Snowfall- Accepted!

@Sunshine- Accepted!

@Everyone- Just repeating the rules, you can have up to 4 cats. No more than 4. Only 2 of them can be high ranking. I consider high ranking being a warrior, deputy, leader, and Medicine Cat. I'll do an update soon. By the way, if you sent your form but save is running out, please tell me.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

Name:Snowflower

Age:15 moons

Gender:Female

Rank:queen

Appearance: white tabby with gold stripes and blue eyes.
Personality:Very caring and kind. Is a bit shy and has a temper.

Skills:Taking care of kits. Convincing cats to do stuff.

Backstory:She used to live in thunderclan, then she got a riverclan mate and had kits. She ran away with her mate so she couldn't be exiled from her clan. She is currently pregnant with kits.

Other:nIGHTcLAN. Is mates with Creekfall and is pregnant with his (2) kits.

 

Name:Creekfall

Age:18 moons

Gender:Male

Rank:Warrior

Appearance:Blackish blueish fur with amber eyes

Personality:Very secretive and shy. Can be very funny and sarcastic, and caring. tba

Skills:collecting moss. Scent marking.

Backstory:He used to live in Riverclan, then he fell in love with Snowflower and became her mate. Ran away with her so he could be with her. He found out about Nightclan from some rouges.

Other:nIGHTcLAN,

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

          ~Crystul~

 

 He left the other 99 to look for YOU

 

 Mirror, Tell me something...

 

          #Prolife

          #Canada

          #Homeschool

          #RCatholic

         

 I may suddenly leave for a long time...

                   

up

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Sunshine

Or Sakari

 

You're my constant in every moment

Constant

You've never failed me

All my life

You have never left my side

You are my constant

 

#SaveTheSouthernResidents

 

 

#StandWithSeaWorld

 

It never hurts to keep looking fosunshine.-Eeyore

@Crystal- Accepted!

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

When can we start rping?

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

          ~Crystul~

 

 He left the other 99 to look for YOU

 

 Mirror, Tell me something...

 

          #Prolife

          #Canada

          #Homeschool

          #RCatholic

         

 I may suddenly leave for a long time...

                   

@Crystal- You saw the clan chart chart update, right? Well, when I said need (a number) to start, that's what I ment. I'll probably make some more cats soon.

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

Lαɳα

I'm Nerdy and proud!

Part of the arry otter rotection lub!

Part of the Order of the Bananana!

#Hufflepuff

#DogLover

#LoverOfLotsOfBooksAndSeries

Stars: 207

Beni WingStar Nattily Azul Lilac (flip) Mr. Cellophane

What does the territory and camp look like? 

  • Posted at:

Please tell us why you'd like to report this post

          ~Crystul~

 

 He left the other 99 to look for YOU

 

 Mirror, Tell me something...

 

          #Prolife

          #Canada

          #Homeschool

          #RCatholic

         

 I may suddenly leave for a long time...

                   

    1 , , 3 , 4