ok, so I've basically got the setting down pat, apart from cities (/325883, page 2), but I need help with the plot.

so far, I've got just dragons and people going about their days, both on Makala, my AU, and Pyhhria, at least until an electrical storm spits a group of 8 friends, all from different tribes (they live in the town that winter was starting at the end of book 10, as this is 35-50 years later), out above the plains of Makala's as-of-yet-unnamed main continent, and also over a railroad mainline. they investigate, (or do whatever they want,) before deciding to ask someone... 

and that's as far as i've gotten.

oh, and on Makala, you can have a dragon OC, and make it look any way you like. in fact, i'm thinking of making a shark-like one...

anyway, I need help with names, cities, stuff like that. I will gaurantee you guys spots in it.

 

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How many cities were you planning on having? I mean, you seem to have quite a few good places right now from what I saw on your homethread.

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yeah, I kinda drew up a map last night (I always have my best ideas when i'm half asleep for some reason), and I did... 7 or 8. i'll try and list them off.

Wolf Creek Pass

Tobaxo

Augusta 

New Bernun

Grand Junction

Elbert City

 

...and that's all I can remember. I marked out the territories, including places where Kiedran had let humans have the coastline, rivers, mountains, forests, and names for those rivers. I also marked the longest and main pass over the Continental mountains, which is Wolf Creek Pass, named for the first creatures to find it and cross it, which was pretty difficult, as it's over 100 miles long. the city that is named after it is in the middle of the pass, and is mostly a stopover for trains climbing through.

Tobaxo is an agricultural town, Grand junction is the hub for all the majoer western railroads, Elbert City is a port town, New Bernun is a city on one side of Wolf Creek Pass (kinda like Denver), and Augusta is... Augusta.

 

and I came up with Steam loco classes for this AU. here are the ones I remember:

4-8-4: coyote class

4-8-8-4: Beta class

4-8-8-8-4: Alpha class

4-6-6-6-6-4: lightning class

4-8-8-8-8-4: Thunder class

 

and that's all I remember, though there are more. I mostly need help with lore, backstory, plot, etc. cuz most of my stories never get finished cuz I have a poorly planned-out plot, though tHAT WILL NOT HAPPEN HERE!

 

 

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Hey, I'm going to be kind of busy to day, but I'll help for sure.

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oh, and I need a name for it.

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This is already looking really good...

 

If you want to make this a FWRP, then you don't really need much of a plot, though some lore sounds interesting.

 

Maybe they had an ancient battle, or a revolution of some sort?

And maybe some species still have a rivalry between them, like the IceWings and NightWings in the canon?

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I did found a name for one of the railroads, though I need like 2 or 3 more, and 2 more cities. The railroad is the Tobaxo Southern, and the other cities are Port Balen and Aldosta. 

@fairy who would have the ancient battle or revolution? and this is set about 50 years after Darkness of Dragons, so the Icewings and Nightwings have settled any conflicts by now. I basically need a reason they're there, like to stop something from happening or something.

 

 

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I presume from your message on my homethread that I'm allowed to crash...?

 

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I meant the Makalan species might have had a war of some sort xD

 

And if you already have a plot, and there are limited spots, then maybe this would work better as a RP?

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@galaxian yes

@fairy maybe? and probably, it should be an RP, I don't really know how to form FWRPs.

but I am not good at plot, and FWRPs don't need plot...

hmmmmm...

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Okay, so most of the FWRPs are about setting and character personalization. If you're not good at plot, just make up the first one where most of the starting characters can meet. Make big room in the setting for character development and plot development.

 

What do you have thus far in the above?

 

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I think we're good on setting, as I have a whole flippin PLANET to play with, and as for starting plot, I've got a pretty well-formed (in my opinion) idea in the original post at the top. Mostly, I just need forms and a name for the darn thing.

 

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I can help you with form if need be, though I think I need more information on setting and starting plot. Would you mind typing that out? I basically need essentially terminology and then the "basic" stuff.

 

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the basic plot is that 8 dragons, all from different tribes, get caught in a thunderstorm heading back to the town they live in, which is at the foot of the mountain range, east side. it's that town that winter started in the epilogue of darkness of Dragons, but 50 years later. they fly through it, but end up getting slammed into some electrical thing in the core of the storm by a tornado, and end up being teleported to Makala. 

I think it would be better for you to show me your idea of what the forms should look like, and go from there.

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