Just letting you guys know the idea is all over the place and defies logic entirely. And as for the feedback, nothing you say could be worse then what I think, so don't worry about hurting my feelings.
So basically, the main character is an elf princess. She is 18 years old and her name is Isla. Her parents are marrying her off to some noble or prince or something from another kingdom. She hates that idea, so she runs away the night before the wedding. She takes one of the ships from the royal Navy and becomes captain of a band of (good) pirates. She finds out that her 13 year old sister stowed away on the ship with her. Ily (the sister) refuses to go home so Isla lets her become 2nd in command. Eventually in the story the pirates will make their way to an island that is supposedly gaurded by a great evil.
I don't want to say anything more because I don't want to give too much away in case I ever post it on here.
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